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The 26 eclectic-genre
short stories for my #AtoZChallenge are excerpts from travelogue notes by
novel character
Gahlen, who first appeared in SHARDS OF
MEMORY – Oral History in a Heartbeat.
Each A-to-Z daily post is a
complete, stand-alone tale.
Maniwaki Wild Rice Harvest
Genre: Mystical Fantasy
(388 words)
An unexpected event on this autumn day forever won Alsoomse’s
admiration of the mystical being, Padnini. Her duty for the rice harvest was to
help paddle a canoe along the St. Lawrence River. Maniwaki tribesmen harvested
the wild rice by bending the stalks with two sticks held between nimble fingers.
With a quick flick of their wrist, the grains fell into the canoe’s hull. A guide
steered while Alsoomse propelled them forward.
As the sun rose higher, Alsoomse’s arms grew weak. The
river’s flow thundered in her ears. She swooned and fell into the chilled waters,
her thoughts fading as she sank deeper.
Alsoomse slowly envisioned Padnini, the trickster who dwelled
within the forest. Some in his group of magical beings performed dangerous acts
such as kidnapping children. But Padnini’s pranks were harmless. Why had he
chosen the day Alsoomse participated in a centuries-long ritual of harvesting wild
rice to play tricks with her life?
Her eyelids fluttered as warm breath filled her lungs.
She recognized her father and asked, “Have I died?”
“You are saved to do great things, Alsoomse,” he said.
“But you are yet too young to participate in this tradition. Our decision to include
you was ill-conceived.”
While recovering, Alsoomse received special attention.
All accepted blame for allowing her participation in the harvest without realizing
the possible consequences. Yet none considered her too young to participate. Her
father had uttered those words only to appease the evil powers.
The more dangerous of the magical beings believed that
they alone had a right to earth’s bounty. As revenge for the tribe’s tradition
of harvesting wild rice during the equinox, they had attempted to end a
helpless girl’s life.
“Father,” Alsoomse said one morning, “When I fell into
the river, was I invisible?”
“Yes,” he said. “Never before have the angry ones made
a human invisible. We could not save you.”
“Then why am I alive?”
“That mischievous Padnini saw your plight,” her mother
said, “and made you visible over the protestations of the evil ones. We know
not what he has in store for you.”
The teacher welcomed Alsoomse back to school. Life
returned to normal. And on her way home the first day of winter, Alsoomse
slipped and fell on a patch of ice she would have sworn was not there a moment
before.
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I'm delighted to have made my way here today to this fascinating tale. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting, Deborah. I am glad you stopped in today because this story was so much fun to write.
DeleteInteresting concept...
ReplyDeleteThe idea of writing short stories in a variety of genres proved to be quite entertaining for me, John. And a valuable lesson in concise storytelling.
ReplyDeleteOur family just had wild rice soup tonight for dinner. We've canoed through wild rice in northern Minnesota. Mindfulness to Avoid Burnout
ReplyDeleteI do love wild rice soup but I have never canoed through wild rice patches.
ReplyDeleteI use wild rice in my dinner.
ReplyDeleteIt is nice to read this short story. Will keep visiting your blog.
Intriguing tale! I've read through it three times and I'm still not sure if Padnini was pulling a prank, or bumping her off. Either way, the final paragraph haunts and enchants.
ReplyDeleteThis tidbit deserves a story continuation! Well done.
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