Demise of Bovine in Flash-Fire
Genre: Soft-boiled Thriller
(381 words)
A slow drizzle began around noon,
chilling the air. We attended to crops under an overcast sky. Near dark, a Dresden
cousin came looking for help when his sow’s head got stuck in the fence. I sent
the two boys to hold the pig calm while the cousin worked the head loose. He
invited the boys to stay the night. I agreed to send word if our cow commenced
to calve.
The storm picked up around midnight.
Rolling thunder had Ma squirreled under the quilt. When an ear-splitting boom
hinted the earth had shattered, we figured the well exploded.
Instead, fire was licking at barn
walls. Panicked-animal sounds confirmed flames had crept inside. The
chickens were safe in their coop. The pig pen lay upwind. Only a plow horse and
milk cow were in the barn overnight. We rushed out to salvage what we could.
When I swung the barn door open, the
horse escaped. But flames blocked a path to the cow’s stall. I dared not
attempt a rescue, even after Ma mentioned its condition. The cow was expected
to calve soon, assuring milk production for another year and a frolicking young
calf.
Rain did little to contain the
fire. Dry hay fueled the flames. Neighbors arriving with buckets formed a
brigade but knew the effort was hopeless.
Mournful bovine sounds rose, then
ceased when a final sheet of roofing collapsed. We sprang into action, using
farm tools to disperse smoldering materials while searching desperately for the
cow.
Ma stood near the pig pen, shivering as she regained her
senses. She no longer mourned the cow’s death or the loss of a newborn. Rather,
she feared for her young daughter who had taken to spending nights near the
unborn calf she already called Creamy.
A cry arose as men located the
cow. Reinforced slats supported the fallen roof and the animal’s muscular carcass
protected a newborn calf. Within the jumble of legs lay another figure.
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The tale has a happy ending. Although the cow died, the boys administered round-the-clock feedings and the calf
flourished to become a milk cow. Sheltered by a mother cow whose instincts were
to protect its young, the daughter also survived.
“On the site of the burned barn,
a commemorative rock reads: Mother of
Creamy.
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Glad to know the calf survived. Your flash reminded me of James Herriot's stories. Happy A-Zing!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely had to go with a bittersweet, happy ending, Nilanjana. Quite a compliment to be compared to such a prolific writer as James Herriot.
ReplyDeleteTerrific storytelling. You really racked up the tension then brought us back down again with a happy ending. Delightful.
ReplyDeleteMy A-Z of Children's Stories
Not exactly a children's story, Keith, but happy endings are always best.
DeleteA grand tale of life and death well done. . . . And many thanks again for a second visit to my blog. That is very kind.
ReplyDeleteRob Z Tobor
Thanks, Rob. And I am enjoying your tales as well.
DeleteOn September 1, 1894 in Hinckley, Minnesota, there was a raging fire. There was a man that survived in a cow's corpse. This is a great story. I'm really enjoying these tales. Clear the Clutter to Avoid Burnout
ReplyDeleteHeather, thank you for sharing that fascinating news about the man surviving in a cow's corpse. I love "stories behind the stories" and that brings my imaginary story to real life.
ReplyDeleteGrowing up on a farm, of course these things happen in horrible weather lol Glad for the happy ending!
ReplyDeleteStephanie Finnell
@randallbychance from
Katy Trail Creations
Yes, Stephanie, this story required a happy ending.
DeleteYou are a master storyteller! I'm enjoying your short tales - you achieve a lot with few words. That's a talent!
ReplyDeleteTrisha, I am experiencing a whole new world with short story writing. That's what makes the AtoZ Challenge so much fun.
ReplyDeleteWow. I was freaked out. But then I saw the happy ending. Phew. I mean, I know things do happen, but wow. Glad it didn't turn out as bad as it could have.
ReplyDeleteJ Lenni Dorner~ Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge, Debut Author Interviewer, Reference& Speculative Fiction Author
Bittersweet but still a relatively happy ending. See you at Operation Awesome!
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