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Shandon Belltower, Cork, Ireland Created by Kglavin
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The 26 eclectic-genre
short stories for my #AtoZChallenge are excerpts from travelogue notes by
fictional character Gahlen, who first appears in SHARDS OF MEMORY – Oral History in a Heartbeat.
Each A-to-Z daily post is a stand-alone tale -
partly true, partly fiction.
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Absorbing an Ancient Scene
Genre: Exploration with Comic Relief
(313 words)
Chiming bells sent us searching for an access to the
steeple tower. We scrambled in typical sibling rivalry fashion toward a narrow
stone staircase. Naturally, I came in last, but not due to my bum leg. I had
stopped to dip my fingers into another holy water font. Carved in jagged
lettering along its facade were words I assumed were of Irish dialect. While I
recognized certain words as English, their meaning escaped me. I copied the
letters, exactly as they appeared on the font, into my notebook for future
research.
MAD ETHIS PANT
AT THEIR CHAR
GES
By the time I reached the stairwell, my sisters had
begun their climb toward the bells. With each step, I felt the space between
the staircase walls diminish. Though not one to suffer from claustrophobia, I experienced
a heightening fear. Obviously, my overactive imagination was at work.
Fairy tales had been the path my grandparents chose to
teach me the intricacies of my ancestry. Had this stairwell once witnessed a dastardly
act that bled into the walls - my sensitive nature absorbing the ancient scene and
translating the event into a current dread? Reluctant to analyze the surroundings
further, I urged my legs to climb faster, adrenaline seeking to overpower . . .
Before that thought fully formed, my sisters called
down to me. “Stop lingering, Gahlen. The sealant on the rock steps is potent
enough to make you start hallucinating.”
With a shudder of relief, I rushed upward, the poetic
rhythm of Shandon bells urging me on. The panoramic view from the tower made my
efforts worthwhile. In silence, we surveyed the city. I snapped several photographs knowing I could never fully capture the tranquility of the River Lee rippling through
the Irish countryside of Cork. My overactive imagination would have to suffice.
*Craftsmen MADE THIS PANT (font) AT THEIR CHARGES (for
their patrons).
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Monday, April 1, 2019
Absorbing an Ancient Scene #AtoZChallenge
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A climb worth making and a great start to your collection of stories!
ReplyDeleteMy children's stories - Are we there yet?
Thanks for visiting, Keith. Looking forward to reading your posts through April.
ReplyDeletePartly true, partly fiction. That's the best :)
ReplyDeleteStephanie Finnell
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Katy Trail Creations
I agree! So much fun to spin a tale around that nugget of truth.
DeleteAh, the claustrophobia of climbing a bell tower. A feeling I can certainly relate to - I didn't know I was claustrophobic until I started climbing those towers. ;) Excited to follow along in truth and in fiction.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sara. Sharing stories in April should be a fun journey for all of us.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of when my children were young. They climbed a tower at Fort Snelling and my middle daughter suddenly realized she was afraid of heights. Getting her down was quite the feat. I'm looking forward to more :) Asking for Help to Avoid Burnout
ReplyDeleteThat must have really been scary for her. I lived in Mpls but never climbed the tower at Fort Snelling.
DeleteVery nice :D Thank you for sharing <3
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting, Raven. Will be visiting your blog again soon.
DeleteWhat a great start! I can't wait to read the rest of them.
ReplyDeleteFunny how it sounds so simple when we sign up then the letters keep piling up. Thanks for the encouragement, Morgan.
DeleteWonderful detail. It makes me feel like I'm walking up the stairs.
ReplyDeleteThat is always good for a writer to hear, Sascha.
DeleteOh my, I loved that! I was walking up and feeling panic along with the character. Well done!
ReplyDeleteDB McNicol, author
Microfiction: Automobile
Nervousness is contagious for sure, Donna. Go to know it came across in the writing. Thanks for visiting and I look forward to following your posts throughout April.
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