Due to a death in the family, I am unable to participate in November's IWSG blog post.
May you all be safe and have an enjoyable Thanksgiving.
I look forward to posting again in December.
Due to a death in the family, I am unable to participate in November's IWSG blog post.
May you all be safe and have an enjoyable Thanksgiving.
I look forward to posting again in December.
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Eruption on volcanic flank of Kilauea on Big Island |
ERUPTION by Michael Crichton & James Patterson |
From my review of ERUPTION: For decades, volcanoes have fascinated me. Seeing Kilauea up close and walking Devastation Trail on the Big Island of Hawaii were memorable lifetime experiences. I knew Michael Crichton would include plenty of satisfying and well-researched information in his story, not only about Mauna Loa but about Madam Pele. As a kama'aina, I wasn't disappointed.
Waikiki - one sure cure for "writer's block" |
Living in Hawaii means easy access to beaches and hiking trails, with plenty of distractions that send writers into a quandary about how to divide their time. But "writer's block" is a great excuse to grab a paperback novel or loaded e-reader and head to Waikiki for a bit of sun and relaxation. Something is certain to trigger thoughts of the next best-selling novel.
Recently, I read an entertaining novella a bit out of my mainstream reading genre (and suggested age category of 10-18) Mask of the Vampire by author Drep Code. A member of Hawaii Fiction Writers, Drep is always eager to discuss the background of his writing and the plotline of the story. In Hawaii, he majored in Criminal Justice and Psychology at Chaminade University before writing this intriguing tale of self-discovery.
Suggested reading age: 10 - 18 years |
Murder and Magik |
Rachel previously published The Writer’s Coloring Book, which is also the eponymous title of her website filled with tools for visual artists to convert their ideas into text. Writer's Coloring Book - Color Your Way to a Complete Novel (writerscoloringbook.com)
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While relaxing on my lanai and reading an action-filled novel, I came across a passage that stated the battleship Missouri is maintained by the Navy in Bremerton, Washington. My first reaction was, “No it’s not; the ship is docked on Ford Island at Pearl Harbor here in Hawaii.”
On Monday, June 22, 1998, the USS Missouri, nicknamed Mighty Mo, was ceremoniously towed around iconic Diamond Head at the east end of Waikiki. Following a 22-day voyage made with tugboats and a towing bridle attached to the celebrated, ocean-going tugboat Sea Voyage, thousands of us stood on the beach cheering as the decommissioned battleship rounded the extinct volcanic crater. A fireworks display welcomed the ship as it was escorted by local fishing vessels, pleasure boats, and helicopters, slowly making its way along the horizon toward Pearl Harbor’s Poka ‘Ailana (Ford Island), where it would ultimately welcome visitors to its majestic decks.
The battleship’s extensive history dates from the 1940s, and the ship’s quarterdeck witnessed the surrender of the Empire of Japan (which Japan announced on August 15, 1945) ending WWII.
Beginning of USS Missouri Memorial tour |
Visitor (me) on deck of battleship USS Missouri |
Members of Hawaii Fiction Writers meet at Aina Haina Library on the first Saturday of each month with discussions arranged and led by author Michael Little. The latest meeting focused on the topic of writer's block. More than a few attending writers have suffered this affliction - regardless of age or depth of experience. Each shared their means of dealing with the phenomenon and most confessed that they have suffered through dry spells where the words would not surface.
However, everyone agreed with one member's contribution of
author Jodi Picoult's saying:
"You can edit a poorly written page; but you can't edit a blank page."
The bottom line is that putting thoughts to paper automatically labels you a writer, the author of your thoughts. Whether you choose to share your efforts with others, through printed publication or other means, has no bearing on your status as a writer. Following Picoult's mantra, putting thoughts and words on paper to edit later, is excellent advice for any author who suffers from writer's block. More on the subject can be read here at Melissa Donovan's blog site:
You Can't Edit a Blank Page | Writing Forward
Stephen King says authors should read for four hours each day and write for four hours each day. Others say you cannot have good output without good input. Researching a topic and reading the work of other authors often alleviates writer's block by shifting the anxiety of "needing to produce" to a more relaxed atmosphere of entertainment and gathering new information.
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the Writer's block |
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IWSG August 7 question - Do you use AI in your writing and if so how? Do you use it for your posts? Incorporate it into your stories? Use it for research? Audio?
The easy answer to the above questions, for me, is "No" to all. I have written several novels (two unpublished) plus a book of poetry and never used AI to create or develop the story. My focus now is on writing short stories and the ones I've written for anthologies have all been about topics of personal interest that I could relate to and embellish with research - my favorite part of writing. I look forward to reading the IWSG blog comments today to learn more about AI, programs others use, and success stories.
As for my interest in writing short stories again, I often wonder about length and whether long or short stories are more appealing to readers. Social media sites seem to owe much of their attraction to easy access, short comments, and "photos that tell the story."
Do shorter attention spans require shorter short stories?
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Evoke emotion by stimulating the reader's imagination |
Hawaii Fiction Writers members met to discuss and read ending sentences in written works that illustrate the importance of culminating a story with information that will leave the reader satisfied. Whether someone has taken time to read a novel, short story, or haiku, they want to feel the time was well spent, that the take-away is worth the time.
Good book endings should do as least some of these:
1. Conclude the story. (Cliffhangers are for chapter endings, not for sequels coming out next year!)
2. Foreshadow the future.
3. Provoke thought. (One of my favorites points.)
4. Evoke emotion (like a stimulating photograph.)
5. Give a call to action. (The final sentence of my genealogical novel encourages "others to write or tell their own stories.")
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During the second half of the meeting, guest speaker Rachel Funk Heller shared information about her soon-to-be-published novel, The Eclipse Killer, involving a series of ghoulish murders in San Francisco. Solving the cases rests with a gifted astrologer and owner of a metaphysical bookstore.
Rachel's talk culminated in an interesting and informative discussion about tarot cards and astrology, lunar cycles, and the moon's influence upon tides and rivers.
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Today I’m participating in WWW Wednesdays, at Taking on a World of Words. Here’s how it works:
The Three Ws are:
What are you currently reading?
What did you recently finish reading?
What do you think you’ll read next, and/or what are you eagerly awaiting?
WWW Wednesday, 31-July-2024 | Taking On a World of Words
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I am currently reading WE BURNED OUR BOATS by Karen Jones Gowen. When young folks pick up and move cross-country, the change for them is usually easily accomplished because adventure is in their bones and discovery is their main objective. But when folks who have spent years working to raise a family and have reached that time in life when relaxing in the back yard with a cold drink and a good book is enticing, it seems that a move, not just cross-country, but totally out of the country, sounds less appealing. Not for Karen and husband Bruce Gowen, though, who packed up a few belongings and flew to Guatemala City, then rode to the highland region where their daughter and son-in-law were opening a hotel in Panajachel. Karen and Bruce were there to help them.
Because I have no plans to travel to Central America, I am enjoying all the adventures Karen Jones Gowen vividly describes, giving me the opportunity to experience travel from the comfort of my lanai, with a cold drink at my side.
We Burned Our Boats by Karen Jones Gowen |
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Recently I read John Sandford's DARK ANGEL, a spinoff from his Prey/Lucas Davenport series and featuring 25-year-old daughter and protagonist, Letty Davenport, who is an investigator for the inspector general of the Department of Homeland Security. Of course, with all her training and fitness, she doesn't just sit around doing paperwork and her Sig 938 is a constant companion with which she is apparently capable of shooting off specific parts of fruit flies. While Lucas was once my favorite of Sandford's characters, and Letty is quite entertaining, my top favorite is Virgil Flowers. Favorite or runners-up, Sandford novels always get 5-star reviews from me.
Dark Angel by John Sandford |
Another book I recently read is LARCENY & LAST CHANCES: 22 Stories of Mystery & Suspense (A Superior Shores Anthology Book 4 from Judy Penz Sheluk.) Many of the short stories, written by 22 different authors, are top-notch and worth the price of the book; some are entertaining with an unusual or unexpected climax, which is always a bonus for a mystery reader.
Larceny & Last Chances Edited by Judy Penz Sheluk |
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Next upcoming on my reading list is Randy Wayne White's BLACK WIDOW, #15 in his Doc Ford action series set in Florida. Mr. White's novels hooked me years ago after a relaxing vacation (to escape Wisconsin's cold winter) on Captiva and Sanibel Island. One day while swimming, a dolphin appeared nearby along with a friend and hooked me on the laidback lifestyle of southern living. Reading Doc Ford novels keeps that adventurous feeling alive. And though I did eventually leave the snowy climate behind, heading much farther south where the weather is always aloha-plenty warm, Doc Ford is still one of my favorite novel characters.
Black Widow by Randy Wayne White |
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When a local library in Honolulu decided to close its doors for good, I snagged a hard cover copy of Dashiell Hammett's The Maltese Falcon, the only full-length novel in which Detective Sam Spade appears. The statuette of a falcon, an object that has been lost for centuries, is the focus of a deadly search around the world. Guns are drawn. People die.
A MacGuffin in a book is an object or event that is necessary to the plot or its characters' motivation but is irrelevant in itself. The missing falcon is the MacGuffin in The Maltese Falcon as desire for its ownership drives the plot. The ring in J.R.R. Tolkien's saga and the Philosopher's Stone in J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter novel are both MacGuffins that give purpose to the novels' plotlines. I would include Stephen King's Dark Tower series, a tale of a gunslinger's quest for the tower which is reported to be the nexus of all universes. The tower is the MacGuffin that drives the plot but is irrelevant in itself.
While reading Dashiell Hammett's novel again recently, I thought about current day MacGuffins and how an event such as an upcoming wedding can indirectly control current actions. Preceding a wedding, the bride-to-be nervously over-eats her way out of her wedding dress; the groom has second thoughts and leaves town; the father of the bride embezzles company funds to pay for the wedding reception; or little sister of the groom shoplifts a wedding gift for her brother.
And then there are MacGuffins in movies!
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Iolani Palace in Honolulu on Oahu, Hawaii the only royal palace in the USA (recent photo) |
King David Laʻamea Kamananakapu Mahinulani Naloiaehuokalani Lumialani Kalākaua is a charming and handsome modern renaissance man who cuts a dashing figure in his ceremonial Victorian English royal and military dress with fashionable bushy mutton chops. Jovial, his brown eyes sparkle with delight as he formally receives the Ward family.
Ogawa, Joy (2024-01-04T22:58:59.000). Victoria Ward and the Gilded Age of the Hawaiian Kingdom. Austin Macauley Publishers. Kindle Edition.
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Today I’m participating in WWW Wednesdays, at Taking on a World of Words. Here’s how it works:
The Three Ws are:
What are you currently reading?
What did you recently finish reading?
What do you think you’ll read next, and/or what are you eagerly awaiting?
WWW Wednesday, 17-July-2024 | Taking On a World of Words (wordpress.com)
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Currently I am reading Vixen 03 by Clive Cussler. Last year I decided to start reading more series books so I wouldn't always be wondering what my next read would be. Mr. Cussler's long list of novels and action-packed plots are a perfect addition to my reading list. I don't often write book reviews but when an interesting remark or topic item within the plot catches my eye, as happened with this story, it compels me to write a short essay to post on my blog (which will appear in August.)
Recently, I read The Storied Life of A.J. Fikry by Gabrielle Zevin, a book club choice. I haven't been reading many literary novels, but this one is definitely my favorite of the year. Along with the entertainment factor, it also offers excellent suggestions for future reading.
Next on my reading list is Wolf Pack by C.J. Box, another series author who has made my reading experience a pleasurable pastime. Another amazing author, Randy Wayne White, will follow with Black Widow.
What's on your reading list?
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Chicago Civic Center (now Daley Plaza) with reflection of City Hall |
Since my early teens, I have been an avid reader of book series in an eclectic range of genres, including mystery, thriller, detective, and adventure. When the 2019 pandemic hit, my reading schedule went into overdrive, focusing on authors ranging from Sandford, Connelly, and Baldacci to Randy Wayne White, C.J. Box, and Robert P. Parker. Cussler, Crichton, J. A. Jance, and Elmore Leanord also have designated spaces on my TBR bookshelves, both in print and e-Book formats.
But when a local author here in Hawaii publishes a book, I clear my calendar to read their latest novel, memoir, anthology, or book of poetry. When I received word that author Ray Pace on the Big Island had published a new sequel to his "Wise Guys You'll Love, If You Know What's Good For You" series, Cadillac Clem: A Cody Ross Enigma, I knew I was in for a treat. Ray knew it too - because his story unfolds in Chicago, a town where I once worked and chose as the setting of my first mystery novel.
For Cadillac Clem, it's 1960, the heat is on, and the Republican convention is gearing up for the coming election. Ike will attend, throwing his support behind his once-vice president for future president of the United States. And Private Eye Cody Ross, working on a missing person's case, is right in the middle of the ever-escalating action.
This may be my favorite novel in the series to date. Cadillac Clem is a well-told and entertaining detective story played out during the planning of the 1960's Republican Convention in Daley's Chicago. Sometimes, as you might agree with, it's hard to tell the good guys from the bad guys. And there is never a dull moment for P.I. Cody Ross and an entertaining cast of interesting characters.
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Cadillac Clem: A Cody Ross Enigma
by Ray Pace
Available at Amazon.com
Frogs are well represented in such tales as the eponymous Kissing Frogs; Frog Prince Wants a Condo; and The Kindred Frog. Some tales are a bit more unconventional, quirky to be precise. Examples include: Jack and the Beanstalkers; Why Were the Brothers Grimm?; and Hansel, Gretel, and the Food-Challenged Witch.
One of my tales easily falls into the "quirky" category. The story employs details from various tales of Snow White, details concerning the methods in which the queen attempts to eliminate Ms. White - diabolical plans that included ordering the huntsman to cut out the step-child's heart; then resorting to poison, and finally asphyxiation. And while Snow White is forever associated with the lives of seven dwarfs, my story has Detective Whitey Snow focused on the demise of seven corpses.
Available at Amazon.com |
"What is the relationship between ancient myths and retold fairy tales? When does a myth morph into a fairy tale? And at what point is the fairy tale turned inside out to become “fractured” or “retold”?
She continues in this following excerpt: "In one sense, all myths, fairy, and folk tales, as we know them now, are retold. They arise out of oral tradition and are passed along by memory, which inevitably puts new spins on their telling, to match the cultural environment in which they’re told. From the sacred to the profane, nothing seems outside the permissible."
Would your version of a fractured fairy tale lean toward romance, comedy, mystery, or a completely different genre? Pick a well-known or even an obscure fairy tale and let your imagination run wild writing a whole new (fractured) version.
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Resolutions exploding like Fireworks! |
Almost everyone compiles a list of resolutions, or thinks about making resolutions, at the start of each New Year. Then July rolls around, and with half the year gone, the list becomes more burden than incentive. My good-intentions list is no exception - other than for my "reading resolution" as recorded on my annual Goodreads Reading Challenge.
A reading list keeps me focused. But personal, recommended book suggestions are always welcome and often a pleasant surprise.
Hawaii Fiction Writers group meets monthly at the Aina Haina Library on the island of O'ahu. Recently the library extended an invitation to local writer, G.T. London, to speak about her writing and a recently published sequel to her novel, Second Chances and Then Some.
G.T. London spent years living in England, working as a business and leadership coach, consultant, and trainer in the UK and Canada. She also served as a guest lecturer for MBA students before becoming a full-time writer and moving with her husband to live in Hawaii.
I quickly read G.T. London's first novel before the meeting and commented in my book review:
The intrigue of a mystery and a heavy undercurrent of possible romance held my interest throughout the novel. Strong character development and a satisfying denouement deserve top stars.
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**I am eager to read the author's second novel, Eight Weeks Later, because it is set in Hawaii and has a genealogical mystery in its plotline . . . so stay tuned for future comments!**
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