Showing posts with label research. Show all posts
Showing posts with label research. Show all posts

Friday, August 9, 2024

Dealing With Writer's Block #HawaiiFictionWriters

Members of Hawaii Fiction Writers meet at Aina Haina Library on the first Saturday of each month with discussions arranged and led by author Michael Little. The latest meeting focused on the topic of writer's block. More than a few attending writers have suffered this affliction - regardless of age or depth of experience. Each shared their means of dealing with the phenomenon and most confessed that they have suffered through dry spells where the words would not surface.

However, everyone agreed with one member's contribution of

author Jodi Picoult's saying:

"You can edit a poorly written page; but you can't edit a blank page."

The bottom line is that putting thoughts to paper automatically labels you a writer, the author of your thoughts. Whether you choose to share your efforts with others, through printed publication or other means, has no bearing on your status as a writer. Following Picoult's mantra, putting thoughts and words on paper to edit later, is excellent advice for any author who suffers from writer's block. More on the subject can be read here at Melissa Donovan's blog site:

You Can't Edit a Blank Page | Writing Forward

Stephen King says authors should read for four hours each day and write for four hours each day. Others say you cannot have good output without good input. Researching a topic and reading the work of other authors often alleviates writer's block by shifting the anxiety of "needing to produce" to a more relaxed atmosphere of entertainment and gathering new information. 

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Wednesday, March 10, 2021

RESEARCH: The Fun Part of Writing a Novel



Chicago Temple Building
Digging up facts, reading stories, and traveling to locations (even armchair travel) always gets my blood bubbling -- in a good way. Once the information is boiled down to fit the novel however, the rest goes to waste. (Where food is involved, it goes to my waist!) But rather than filing away all the fun-but-unused stuff, authors can choose to share some of the interesting background facts, as it applies to their novel.
 
Excerpts from For Every Action, a Pepper Bibeau mystery - in red lettering below - take place in the Chicago Public Library (before it became the Chicago Cultural Center on East Washington Street in the Loop.)

 
Flamingo
 
Marshall Fields façade and clock


“Ma’am, can you tell me how to find the books on diseases?” Pepper asked.






After writing the first draft of the novel, I returned to Chicago to brush up on my knowledge of the novel’s setting, mainly the Loop with its fascinating buildings, sculptures, and history.
 
I spent time at the Harold Washington Library Center to do my newspaper research. After printing page after page of old stories about convention riots, sales at Marshall Fields, local strikes, and movie listings (mostly: The Graduate, The Green Berets, and Gone With The Wind,) I was told the library didn’t charge for printing. What a boon for writers and genealogy researchers

Before long I had several books laid out on a hardwood table ready to refresh my memory about sickle cell anemia.

I recalled those old hardwood tables scattered around the public library floor, probably the same tables that furnished the library upon its completion in 1897. Continuing my research for the novel, I read about sickle cell anemia to learn not only the signs and symptoms of the disease, but also the cause of the disease.

The first book folded open to an article on gas gangrene. Among the symptoms listed was acute anemia. An illustration of a gangrenous patient fired my memory and I envisioned a different scene, a lifetime removed. 
 
If you have seen pictures of advanced gangrene, you can appreciate why my protagonist experienced a flashback to someone suffering from napalm burns.

The flashback included in the scene:
 
It is the first morphine injection I administer since arriving here, ten milligrams. The ulcerated areas remind me of the moist gangrene of an advanced diabetic. I detect a putrid smell present in the discharge.
His body heat is palpable from three feet away. His entire body appears affected. Mercifully, he remains unconscious when they unload him from the helicopter. His chest isn’t moving but as I lean closer to check for respirations, a keening howl shatters my concentration.
Conscious now, he suffers extreme pain. I quickly give him another ten milligrams, this time without orders. 
 
The final six lines of the excerpt:
 

I closed the library book and inhaled deeply, trying to clear my sinuses of phantom odors. For the next few hours, I studied medical articles that explained the difference between disc-shaped, normal red blood cells and the crescent-shaped cells of sickle cell anemia.
According to one article, doctors agreed heredity affected the birth rate of babies born with the disease. Another article stated sickle cell was not only an African disease, but was also found in the Middle East.
I reminded myself I wasn’t gathering information to compile a dissertation. I only needed enough facts to ask relevant questions about the insurance claims - if Dr. Patel ever made himself available for an interview.

It was an eye-opener to read about the areas where populations were affected by high frequencies of sickle cell anemia: West Africa (though not South or East Africa), Greece, South Turkey, and India. Another surprise was learning that a person having the gene for sickle cell trait resisted malaria better than others. 

Not all my research focused on the symptoms of diseases. There were also “el" train rides, a Cirque Shanghai performance in the park, and wine!
 
 
 
 

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Friday, January 27, 2017

HAPPY (CHINESE) NEW YEAR: Resolutions, 2017

Happy New Year, Everyone!
May you enjoy health and happiness and aloha in 2017
 

 
My year-end holiday wish list for 2016 ran almost parallel to Steve Martin's Christmas wish list. You can click on the link at the bottom of this post for the video, so I won't go into detail here. Because I am so late getting rolling in 2017, I consider this a Happy Chinese New Year's post!


Today I am ready to commit to my 2017 goals. This year, there will be fewer than previous years as
Looking to the Pacific.
Scene at Waikiki Beach:
maybe from your room with a view!
one goal is to add less pressure to my daily life! After five years as Sisters in Crime/Hawaii president (one-year temporary and four-years elected), I am eager to step back and offer assistance.

Future projects include a second anthology of mystery short stories set in Hawai'i, and participation in the Left Coast Crime 2017 convention, Honolulu Havoc, at Hilton Hawaiian Village.
(See the link below to sign up.)

Reading is one of my favorite pastimes, so it seems almost unfair to make it a goal or resolution. My Goodreads Challenge list will lean more toward non-fiction, with focus on fleshing out my genealogical novel. The chapters cover several areas of Europe, homelands of ancestors who immigrated to the United States in the middle 1800s. Research has always been one of my favorite parts of writing. With this novel, I can utilize much of the information collected over the decades via personal contact, internet research, and a few special trips.

It would be easy to add a goal to eat healthier this year.
But one of my goals is to be honest with myself, so scratch that.

Purging (clothes, DVDs and CDs, old correspondence and bills, and books) did make the list, though.

Something I want to do, but don't want to make it a "must" is to more fully enjoy living in Hawai'i. Yeah, I know - - duh!

Steve Martin's Christmas wish list:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w6w5vgYVVmA

Website for Honolulu Havoc, Left Coast Crime Convention 2017: http://www.leftcoastcrime.org/2017/index.html


WHAT'S ON YOUR LIST?


FIREWORKS IN HONOLULU
TO WELCOME THE NEW YEAR
 

Tuesday, October 4, 2016

#IWSG When Do You Know Your Story is Ready?

 

The Insecure Writer’s Support Group 
Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!
 
Founder Alex J. Cavanaugh's awesome co-hosts for the October 5 posting of the IWSG are Beverly Stowe McClure, Megan Morgan, Viola Fury, Madeline Mora-Summonte, Angela Wooldridge, and Susan Gourley! 
 

 
 
 
This week, I am in the middle of editing a short story for an upcoming mystery anthology. My critique group has offered their opinions of soft spots, drawn out narrative, and spotty dialogue. After applying all agreeable edits, I will read through the story several times so any rough areas or inconsistencies have a chance to surface.
 
Seeing the question for October's IWSG brought a smile to my face. How timely to consider when exactly I will know that my story is ready.
 
October 5 IWSG Question: When Do You Know Your Story is Ready? 
 
Determining that my story is ready isn't something I take lightly. I don't suddenly one day say, "Enough already. I don't want to look at this story one more day or I'll become physically ill."
 
Well, okay, I do say that, but that isn't when I mark the story finished.
 
Now it's time to set the work-in-progress aside for a day or two. Going back for a last look always produces at least one new proofreading error or, worse, a glitch in the plot or timeline that requires a touch up.
 
After that final read-through, barring some catastrophic find, I am ready to mark the story complete. That's when I know my story is ready . . .  ready for me to let go.
 
Is this a sign of insecurity on my part,
or just a realization that if the story is complete,
it means I have to start writing something new?
 
 
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Tuesday, April 12, 2016

K is for KEOGH CLAN OF IRELAND #AtoZChallenge

For this year's challenge, my theme is The Fun in Writing. Each of my 26 posts for April is aimed at
illustrating fun parts of an author's day. A writer doesn't only write.
Creating a story or an essay requires research, revision, editing, and lots and lots of coffee and chocolate.


K is for KEOGH
What's in an Irish Name?
 
My relatives from Tipperary, Ireland have the name McKeough. In researching the purpose of beginning a name with the prefix Mac, Mc, or O, I learned the following:
 
In ancient Ireland the population was much smaller than today and the mass movement of people was uncommon. It was usual therefore for a person to be known only by one name. This single name system began to break down during the eleventh century as the population was growing and there was a need for a further means of identification. The solution was to adopt a prefix such as Mac (Mc is an abbreviation) or Ó.
 
Mac means 'son of' whilst Ó means 'grandson of'.
 
My relatives moved from Ireland to Lower Canada in the 1840s. No records of movement for free emigrants to Canada were required until 1865. (The USA required these records since 1773.)
 
Engaging in genealogical research and writing stories based on the information garnered during the research process are my idea of finding The Fun in Writing. It isn't climbing Mount Everest or kite boarding in Kailua on O'ahu (no, that's not me on the water!) but the "high" is still there.

 
 
 
(K is also for Kailua and for Kite.)

Sunday, April 10, 2016

I is for INNOVATIVE CHICAGO ARTWORK #AtoZChallenge

For this year's challenge, my theme is The Fun in Writing. Each of my 26 posts for April is aimed at illustrating fun parts of an author's day. A writer doesn't only write. Creating a story or an essay requires research, revision, editing, and lots and lots of coffee and chocolate.

 
What can be more fun than researching background information for a novel, and then spending your free time checking out the architecture, sculptures, and artwork of the Windy City? Which do you recognize? (Answers below.)
 

(1)

 

(2)

(3)

 
(4)


(5)

(6)
 
(7)
 
 
(1)
The ticket entrance to Auditorium Theatre
of Roosevelt University
A theater in the grand old style, an architectural gem built in 1889
50 E Congress Pkwy, Chicago, IL
 

(2)
City of Chicago: Calder's Flamingo
50 W. Adams St
Chicago, IL 60610
 
 
(3)
A bridge near downtown Chicago
I love this picture because of its unusual vantage point,
but I honestly cannot remember where in Chicago I was standing when I took the photograph!
Anyone have a guess? 
 
(4)
"The Picasso" (Untitled sculpture)
Daley Plaza
50 W. Washington St.
Chicago, IL 60602
 
(5)
Sculptor Loredo Taft’s Fountain of the Lakes
Art Institute of Chicago,
South Garden
 
(6)
The Winged Victory of Samothrace
A copy of the original from Greece, circa 200 BC, which is now in the Louvre Museum, Paris.
This is cast from a mold of the original sculpture in the Louvre Museum, Paris, France.
Location: lobby of the Bank One Center
131 S Dearborn Street
 
(7)
Navy Pier Flags
Navy Pier is a 3,300-foot-long pier on the Chicago shoreline of Lake Michigan.
It is located in the Streeterville neighborhood of the Near North Side community area.
 
 

Tuesday, June 9, 2015

MYNI MYSTERY MOMENT: Absent Authorization


A Myni Mystery Moment (under 300 words)
from my Pepper Bibeau mystery
FOR EVERY ACTION:


“Ma’am, can you tell me how to find the books on diseases?”

The librarian directed me to the elevator, reciting floor and wing numbers for their medical section.
 
Before long I had several books relating to anemia laid out on a hardwood table, ready to refresh my memory about sickle cell anemia. The first book folded open to an article on gas gangrene. Among the symptoms listed was acute anemia. An illustration of a gangrenous patient fired my memory and I envisioned a different scene, a lifetime removed. 

It is the first morphine injection I administer since arriving here, ten milligrams. The ulcerated areas remind me of the moist gangrene of an advanced diabetic. I detect a putrid smell present in the discharge.
 
His body heat is palpable from three feet away. His entire body appears affected. Mercifully, he remains unconscious when they unload him from the helicopter. His chest isn’t moving but as I lean closer to check for respirations, a keening howl shatters my concentration.
 
Conscious now, he suffers extreme pain. I quickly give him another ten milligrams, this time without orders. 

I closed the library book and inhaled deeply, trying to clear my sinuses of phantom odors. For the next few hours, I studied medical articles that explained the difference between disc-shaped, normal red blood cells and the crescent-shaped cells of sickle cell anemia.

According to one article, doctors agreed heredity affected the birth rate of babies born with the disease. Another article stated sickle cell was not only an African disease, but was also found in the Middle East.

I reminded myself I wasn’t gathering information to compile a dissertation. I only needed enough facts to ask relevant questions about the claims, if Dr. Patel ever made himself available for an interview.

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Tuesday, September 30, 2014

INSECURE WRITER'S SUPPORT GROUP: This Sounds Dumb!


The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group day, a day to talk about doubts experienced and fears conquered, and also to offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling.

Our fearless leader, Ninja Captain Alex J. Cavanaugh says:
 Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!
Our Twitter hashtag is #IWSG
My awesome co-hosts for the October 1 special anniversary posting of the IWSG are: Kristin Smith, Elsie, Suzanne Furness, and Fundy Blue!
 

  Be sure to visit the
Insecure Writer’s Support Group Website!!!
 
http://alexjcavanaugh.blogspot.com/p/the-insecure-writers-support-group.html


 
 
 
THIS SOUNDS DUMB!
 
After three weeks of traveling on the mainland, it has been difficult for me to get back into writing mode at home. Not so much writing mode, actually, as editing. My trip was mostly to do research for several projects, the major focus being on my latest novel. Now that the fun is over, I have to knuckle down. Applying the research to various scenes and chapters is the knuckle down part.
 
It hasn't helped that my calendar was packed with meetings and events for two weeks following my return. The final event was "A Taste For Books" silent auction to raise money for The Makiki Community Library, a non-profit, independent library that hosts our Sisters in Crime/Hawaii meetings each month. Delicious food, good wine, free books! And my auction-bid won a fine set of wine glasses and a pair of Hawaiian hand-dipped beeswax candles. No wonder I'm having a difficult time knuckling down!
 
My insecurity, and consequent (or is that subsequent?) inability to knuckle down, lies in how I feel about the plot cohesiveness of my WIP. It sounded great as I wrote the first draft, even held together through the second draft. Now that I am readying it for outside editing, suddenly this sounds dumb, that doesn't make sense, and the other thing definitely needs a complete rewrite.
 
When it comes time to open your work to criticism and editing, do you get the jitters like I do?


Monday, September 15, 2014

ROAD TRIP - THE FUN PART OF WRITING

 
LAKE MICHIGAN - much colder than Waikiki Beach

I always enjoyed the on-scene part of researching a novel.
 
Rocky trails to caves at Maribel in Manitowoc County in Wisconsin. Talk about eerie! Fit right in with my story.
 
 
 
 
For three weeks, in Wisconsin and Massachusetts, I spent many hours visiting sites, talking to people, gathering information, and taking photographs that would support the story in my latest writing project.
 
 

Boiling brats in beer before grilling.
 
 




Food was an important part of my research,
especially the bohemian kolatches.
 
It is debatable whether my research has gotten a bit out of hand. I ended up gathering details for three separate projects. Still, even if not everything pans out, the visits with relatives and friends, discussions over fabulous meals, and colorful photographs made all the hours well-spent.
 
Clouds on the Water - Shoto Lake

For me, Wisconsin and Massachusetts were all about water and food. My research also included such diverse topics as gun cartridges, fishing bait, environmental issues, and taste-testing Friday perch plates at every possible venue.  
I believe my road trip was a success. Now I have to knuckle down and flesh out the story for my fourth Pepper Bibeau mystery novel. The excitement never ends!
 
You are welcome to check out my other Pepper Bibeau mysteries in print and ebook format at Amazon.com and reviews are always welcome.
 




Wednesday, August 6, 2014

THE DAUNTING TASK of WRITING a NEW NOVEL


ALEX J. CAVANAUGH'S awesome co-hosts for the August 6 posting of the IWSG will be Sarah Foster, Joylene Nowell Butler, Lily Eva, and Rhonda Albom!

  Be sure to visit the
Insecure Writer’s Support Group Website!!!

Genre? Check: Mystery

Length? Check: Novel/75K

Setting? Check: Wisconsin

Protagonist? Check: Pepper Bibeau

Plot? Antagonist? Main Characters? Story Structure? Subplots? First Sentence? Motive? Method? Open with action or build to it? Prologue? Climax? Denouement? Epilogue? 

So many questions and decisions make the idea of writing a novel daunting. If every question had to be answered and every decision made before the writing began, there probably wouldn’t be any libraries or book stores. 

I reminded myself often that it wasn’t necessary to know exactly where I was going, and who did what at every turn, before I could write the next scene or chapter. Some days I wrote two thousand words, other days barely two hundred. On three days of the five weeks I spent writing the first draft, I wrote over five thousand words. Those prolific days produced accomplishments and memories that encouraged me to write another day. 

That’s all it takes, some encouragement to write for one more day, because you cannot write for two days at one time. 

Another trick that kept me moving forward was doing only small stretches of research. If I needed information to advance the plot, I would do a quick check on the Internet for details to assure that what I wanted to do wouldn’t paint me into a corner. Next month, I will learn the weight of a rifle loaded and unloaded, the exact distance from one county to another, and the correct bait needed to catch sunfish in June. Knowing a rifle fits into the story, the driving distance is feasible, and catching sunfish in June is legal, I could keep writing. 

What encourages you to keep writing?

 

Tuesday, June 3, 2014

SECOND THOUGHTS ERODE MY CONFIDENCE

It's time for another Insecure Writer's Support Group blog posting. IWSG was created by the awesome ninja captain Alex J. Cavanaugh, and you can find a list of all the other members of the group here.
 
 

After writing and self-publishing three novels in my planned Pepper Bibeau mystery series, I allowed “second thoughts” to erode my confidence in writing a fourth. My marketing for the third novel never really got off the ground. I lost faith in my writing, in the worth of the stories, and in myself as a writer. It was easier to promote authors more imaginative than me and novels containing more important characters than mine. 

A lot of soul-searching followed the publication of my third novel. 

* Why had I chosen to set my stories in the near past (beginning with the late 60s and early 70s) after reading that such novels didn’t sell? Maybe it would be better to write stories occurring in the present. 

* Why was my protagonist a female with a backstory of service as a nurse in the Vietnam War? I had never been in the military, and current bestselling novels focused on action in Afghanistan or other parts of the Middle East. 

* Why did I think the life of an insurance investigator would play well in the Mystery genre? Such a career could never carry a series. 

Once I formed concrete questions to get a handle on my concerns, I considered answers to possible solutions. In November 2013, I used NaNoWriMo to test the theory of boosting my confidence by setting stories in present time. I wrote 50K words of a novel set in 2012. My main character’s backstory and career differed from my original protagonist. The surge of excitement I felt while writing the story compared to eating a new flavor of ice cream or wearing a new red silk dress. The macadamia nut chocolate swirl ice cream delighted my taste buds. The color and feel of the new dress affected most of my other senses. 

What the ice cream and dress didn’t do, and what the new protagonist didn’t do, was to satisfy my core wants and needs. My first love is vanilla ice cream: French vanilla, Country vanilla, Simply vanilla. Ready-to-wear clothes in tranquil colors suit me best. I relish the research required in developing a character whose story spans the years missed while I was “too busy living.” 

This insight resolved my concerns about why to write something “they” say won’t sell. 

For me, appreciation of a good mystery set in a familiar location generates motivation. My goal is to write mysteries that evolve in personally meaningful settings, for the enjoyment and entertainment of readers with similar interests. Book Four is now underway and I am more eager than ever to write the next Pepper Bibeau mystery.