It is difficult to describe the pleasure I derived from writing the poetry that ultimately became a little book: ANOTHER NEW BEGINNING. I believe my participation in years of April A to Z Challenge prepared me to "stick with it" until I wrote and edited all 70 poems. This light-hearted poem reflects our unique ability to absorb emotions.
#30
Sensing Anticipation
She
sees
Crust,
a crispy shell dimpled
by
miniature bubbles.
Like
fragile lava, hardened
She
tastes
Lemon
filling, with scrapings
from
the rind.
Tangy
and mouth-watering
She
touches
Eggs,
whipped while adding
sugar
to the mix.
Scooped
atop the filling
She
inhales
Meringue,
toasted light
until
peaks curl and brown.
Experience
a mother’s love
Mom
always had little tricks for making foods taste a bit more special. She added
small amounts of sugar to her pots of chili. She grated lemon rind and added it
to her lemon pie filling to give it that extra tanginess. The back of my mouth
waters just thinking about the flavor of her lemon pies.
Her
meringue always came out with perfectly browned and curled peaks. I guess all
of her desserts seemed perfect to me. The only “tale” we ever heard as kids was
the one about the chocolate pudding.
Dad
loved to tell the story about when they were newly married. Mom attempted to
make chocolate pudding for him. He said it ended up the texture of tanned horse-hide.
He always got the “faux air slap” gesture for telling the tale, but I think Mom
enjoyed having him tell it. She had no inadequacies in her role as homemaker.
While
Dad served in the Army during World War II, she ran the household and took care
of three small children. Rosie the Riveter, doing her patriotic duty in the
factory while her man protected the country’s freedom, had nothing on my
mother. Housewives kept “home fires” burning during that time. When the men returned
home to their families, they found strong, independent women waiting for them.
Images
of “Leave It To Beaver” moms and “I Love Lucy” wives were as much a joke to these
women as to the men.
Where's the coffee?
What a fun post! And your poem...I can almost taste the pie myself. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting. Pies offer visual appeal as well as pleasure for the tongue. I enjoyed your post today on networking. https://andrealundgren.wordpress.com/2016/04/16/networking-real-or-fake-atozchallenge-networking/
DeleteFun to read and my mom makes Lemon everything! So, I could totally related and now want a slice of pie~ Nice memories!
ReplyDeleteHello from A to Z, Gail. I am growing a lemon tree so your poem was especially fun to read, as I plan to try my hand at making lemon meringue pie someday.
ReplyDeleteLOVE the sensory poem - my mouth is watering and I will have to a piece of lemon meringue pie sometime this week!
ReplyDeleteMy mom was a good cook, but she never made homemade pie so I have yet to develope the skill for flaky pie crust. It is something I want to perfect, though.
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