Showing posts with label Toby Neal. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Toby Neal. Show all posts

Monday, June 15, 2015

THE MYSTERY OF "PAYING IT FORWARD"



 
There should be no mystery in the concept of “Paying It Forward”! 

When someone gives us a leg-up, helping us in our writing careers, it only makes sense to pay forward the favor or compliment. As favors come full-circle, everyone benefits with plenty of satisfaction and success for everyone. 
           

The Makiki Community Library in Honolulu generously allows our Sisters in Crime/Hawaii group to hold monthly meetings at the library. As a way to show support for the library’s generosity, many of the SinC/HI members are also members of the library and donate their published books to the library for the public to enjoy. 

Sisters in Crime, Inc., the national organization, "Pays It Forward" with its “We Love Libraries” contest. They present winning libraries around the country with grants to purchase books for their library. With encouragement from SinC/Hawaii, Makiki Library entered the contest and became a lucky winner, a satisfying example of how “Paying It Forward” came full circle.
 
           
"Paying It Forward" can be as easy as offering a heartfelt “mahalo” or “thank you” to someone who offers advice or a compliment. Recently, I received all the chocolate candy I could eat in two hours (during a Sisters in Crime/Hawaii meeting!) after performing the simple task of showing interest in a fellow writer’s WIP.
             

Hawai'i-based Mystery Author Toby Neal recently demonstrated “Paying It Forward” when Amazon contacted her about participating in their new program. As the author of the Lei Crime series, she is one of only a select group of authors asked to launch a Kindle World. https://kindleworlds.amazon.com/ 


To Pay-It-Forward, Toby invited some of her author friends to share in the world of Hawaiian Islands Detective Lei Texeira by contributing stories for publication to her Lei Crime Series Kindle World. Not everyone was prepared to accept her generous offer at this time, but it was a privilege to be asked and to know the offer still stands. 

Toby describes Kindle Worlds on her web page as: “a wonderful new place on the Amazon site where any writer can develop stories within an established World of known characters.” You can visit Toby at her web site here: http://tobyneal.net/
             

I will be posting “Pay It Forward” stories here on the first and third Monday of each month beginning in September. If you want to share one of your own stories, please contact me at my email address. 

           

 

Tuesday, April 15, 2014

N is for NEAL, TOBY NEAL

The theme of my 2014 A-to-Z Blog Challenge is BLUES, PUPUS, and REVIEWS.
Monday & Wednesday - REVIEWS: mini-style book reviews. 

Toby Neal is the author of the Lei Crime series, two spin-offs of the series, and a stand-alone romance novel. In her spare time, she is working on her memoir and developing a new YA mystery series. She and her photographer husband live on Maui. 

Toby’s latest Lei Crime novel includes two major plot lines, the endangerment of endemic Hawaiian birds that leads to murder, and the potential marriage of the series’ protagonist. With such a significant personal plot line, a ‘runaway bride’ scenario, it seemed inevitable that the mystery plot would suffer. It was an unnecessary concern. Neal weaves the tension of plot and subplot (reader’s choice as to which is which) into a seamless story that never hiccups. 

One suspenseful part of the novel involves the hunt for a killer intent on ending the despicable act of poaching endemic birds by delivering a unique brand of vigilante justice. Controlled narrative pace, excellent description, and rare location in a well-developed mystery add up to a five-star read. 

Anyone who has had an opportunity to see the colorful birds of Hawaii will appreciate the emotional attraction of a storyline that deals with the endangerment of endemic birds. History tells of Polynesians who used red and yellow bird feathers to construct capes, ‘Ahu’ula, for Hawaiian royalty. Even then, bird catchers were forbidden to take the life of the birds, including the red-feathered ‘i’iwi and the yellow-feathered Hawaiian honeycreeper. To catch a glimpse of exotic Hawaiian birds, SHATTERED PALMS takes the reader to a site on Maui that many visitors, residents, and even kama’aina have never experienced. That alone is worth the “price of admission.” 

Because of the local expression, “can-can. no can, no can.” my bucket list now includes a visit to the Hosmer’s Grove trail and overlook at Haleakala National Park.
 
 
Check out Shattered Palms at Amazon.com, along with the other Lei Crime novels in the series:
 
 
 

Wednesday, July 11, 2012

Week #3 of The Next Big Thing: Genre

Second mystery in the series
featuring the amazing Charlie Chan,
Detective-Sergeant of the Honolulu Police
The Plan:
***Answer the ten questions below about a current Work In Progress.

***Tag five other writers (five awesome writers whose work you want us to watch) and link their blogs so we can all hop over and check them out! It’s that simple.

I’ve chosen to answer one question per week with the best intentions of having my novel published by the time I post the final question.

Question #3 of The Next Big Thing:

TNBT: What genre does your book fall under?

GAIL: I’ve always been a fan of stories that fall under the category of Mysteries and its many subgenres: Detective stories, Crime Fiction, Thrillers, Suspense, Police Procedurals, and the Traditional Cozy. There wasn’t much I didn’t consider “Mystery” at the time. I wouldn’t have made a very good librarian.

The novels I signed out of my home town library, back when, always included murder: on-scene, off-stage, imagined or heart-stopping fact. The characters enthralled me with their colorful personalities. Their authors blessed them with such unique names as Sherlock Holmes, Hercule Poirot, Miss Marple, Mrs. Dalloway, Dr. Jekyll, Don Quixote, Jean Valjean, Philip Marlowe, and Charlie Chan.

Later, while the plots still included mystery and murder, the protagonists’ names changed to Kinsey Millhone, Jason Bourne, Anna Pigeon, Lucas Davenport, V.I. Warshawski, Harry Bosch, Irene Kelly, Maura Isles and Jane Rizzoli. In recent years, I've added Lei Teixera and Louise Golden and Pepper Bibeau.

My novels are Mysteries, though they don’t necessarily follow all the rules. If you’ve read the rules on writing mystery novels, then you know it is okay to bend them when it comes to setting, sex of hero (no, not the abstinence or practice of), and two-character per scene limit.

The subgenre of the Pepper Bibeau Mysteries, by my definition, is Soft-Core Investigator, as opposed to Hard-Core Detective. Early in the novel Different in Degree, aka WIP, insurance investigator Pepper Bibeau hastily explains to someone asking for her help: “I’m not a detective or a private investigator. My job is to straighten out complications of insurance claims.” Somehow, though, Pepper’s investigations always lead her into the dark recesses of murder.

Next week’s question: Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?

And now, five awesome writers whose work you want to watch:

Alison Bruce http://alisonebruce.blogspot.com/ @alisonebruce

Stella Atrium http://speakingincommunity.blogspot.com/ @SAtrium

Richard Weatherly http://richweatherly.wordpress.com/ @richweatherly43

Cynthia Meyers-Hanson http://mchanson714.blogspot.com/ http://mchanson714.weebly.com/ @Hanson8046 @mchanson714

J. A. Schneider http://mindi.authormeanders.com/2012/06/author-j-a-schneider-merging-idea-with-character-in-storytelling/ @JoyceSchneider1

Questions for The Next Big Thing Interview

What is the working title of your book?
Where did the idea for the book come from?
What genre does your book fall under?
Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?
Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?
What other books within your genre would you compare this story to?
Who or What inspired you to write this book?
What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?

Sunday, February 19, 2012

Fast Five Interview with Author Toby Neal


Please welcome today's guest, Toby Neal, author of Blood Orchids. Toby grew up in Hawaii, and her familiarity with the islands adds an authentic ring to the novel's setting, the sleepy Big Island town of Hilo. She credits her counseling background in adding depth to her characters-from the villains to Lei Texeira, the courageous and vulnerable heroine in the Lei Crime Series.

FAST FIVE: Toby, thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to visit today. Rather than a Twitter “elevator pitch” of 140 characters (#hashtags included) can you share with us a more detailed account of the novel and your research for Blood Orchids (The Lei Crime Series)?

TOBY NEAL: I’m from Hawaii and I’ve always wanted to read a really good suspense/romance set here, that showcases the unique setting, culture, multiethnic people and dialects, and yet keeps your attention via riveting story alone. I’ve never found one that really did that—Hawaii novels are often written by outsiders, or are too “niche” to appeal to a mainstream audience. I finally decided to write the kind of book(s) I wanted to read! Blood Orchids is the first of a series of crime/suspense/romance novels starring Leilani Texeira, a flawed but courageous young police officer who’s overcome her past and deals out justice to those who need it.



The central crime in Blood Orchids was sparked as an idea by a tragedy that happened in my community—two teen girls were drowned. I was a grief counselor in the crisis team that went to the high school to work with the students in the aftermath. At first we were told they were victims of foul play, though later it turned out to have been accidental. For months after, perhaps because it was so traumatic to hear they’d been murdered, I thought about it, and wondered what it would be like to try and solve such a crime in a small Hawaii community.





FAST FIVE: With the heavy responsibilities inherent in the duties of Police Officers, their work often consumes their lives. Is “the job” the most important part of your protagonist’s life?



TOBY NEAL: Lei is physically and emotionally brave. She’s a sexual abuse survivor, and suffers from blackout/memory loss, and a lot of anxiety. She almost overcompensates because of that, and can be impulsive and put herself at risk—one of the bad decisions she makes lands her in mandatory counseling, which is the best thing for her as she meets unconventional Dr. Wilson who helps her with the past… which unfortunately is still affecting the present. Lei is single, intimacy-phobic, and hypervigilant. In the police department, these characteristics become assets! Her police officer job gives her a place to belong, to channel her anger, to express her drive for justice. She is persistent and has good instincts, which also help her solve cases.





FAST FIVE: The Mystery/Suspense genre is the focus of Fast Five interviews, but what unique twist makes your novel stand out?



TOBY NEAL: The setting. Hawaii is a unique place with multicultural people and special challenges. My protagonist is Hawaiian, Japanese and Portuguese—and her background is a big part of the story, as people’s connections and heritage are very important in Hawaii. In the series, Lei goes to a different island in each book. This will give people a flavor of how each Hawaiian island is special and has unique characteristics.





FAST FIVE: How does your main character’s profession draw her into suspenseful situations, (murder, for instance?)



TOBY NEAL: As a police officer she’s thrown into crime solving. But in Orchids, she has to fight to be on the case. She cares about it and obsesses over it, and that tends to happen whenever she’s on a big one.





FAST FIVE: Is this book part of a series, and are you working on a sequel?



TOBY NEAL: Yes. As I said, there are four books so far in the Lei Crime Series: Blood Orchids, Torch Ginger, Black Jasmine, and Broken Ferns.



I’m also taking a little detour to write a suspense romance with one of the characters that appears in the second two Lei books, FBI agent Marcella Scott, based out of Honolulu. Marcella’s hot looks and cold mind make her deadly on crime, and deadly on hearts! Fans of romantic suspense will love Stolen in Paradise, coming out sometime in the next year.





FAST FIVE: I look forward to each of the Lei Crime novels and to the romantic suspense of the FBI agent in Honolulu. This is not a Fast Five question, more an “if/then” scenario: If Paris is not an option, then where would you most like to spend your time writing and why.



TOBY NEAL: Ha ha! I’d never write in Paris, I’d be painting there! Too distracting!



Part of my “method” is to take an annual, two week “retreat” by myself to some quiet location to start a new book. I get serious work/planning done and kick off the novel. The rest of the year, I plug away at it, while revising a previous work. I can really work anywhere as long as I have electricity, coffee and a good bed.



But my favorite spot to retreat to so far, is Antioch Ranch, a cabin/retreat place in Mendocino, California. Reasonable rates, lovely people, beautiful quiet setting. I was amazingly productive there.



FAST FIVE: Again, thank you for visiting today, Toby, and for sharing detailed information about your Lei Texiera crime series.



For information on Toby Neal’s books, please visit her at: